nice.
I can't really complain about it.
you've got an interesting story being told... breakfast and some computer-ing...
and an unconventional angle too.

Gotta love the thrifty-50

Thanks!

Nice concept...love the grain as well!

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Thanks! Well, in fact I was doubting if I had added too much grain in the picture, so I'm glad you like it.

Nah, I agree, the grain is perfect.

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Thank you too for reassuring! I was decided to leave it like this yet, but it's great to hear more oppinions and see that people likes it too!

great shot! love the depth of field used

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Thanks!

Overall it's a nice shot, the only real issue is the level of grain, while it's a nice effect and fit's well with the photo's theme, it does make the laptop more difficult to make out than what it should probably be (I'll be honest when i say that i did'nt notice it untill i read the title) it may be an idea to try using a wider depth of field, acheivable through aperture controll, or perhaps a different lens, speaking of which, may i ask wich lens you used for this piece?

Like i said, overall it's a nice photo and it does portray the concept you described;
if you were to make any changes i'd say bring the laptop a little bit more into focus, especially the keyboard.

Nice work

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